Hi hi, Emma! I’m really glad that I chose to give feedback on your portfolio this week. I think my favorite story from your portfolio was “The In-Crowd”. I think it was a story that almost everyone can relate to, and it was very entertaining! Before I even scrolled down to see the picture that you added, I was thinking about Mean Girls, so I think that speaks very highly of how you adapted the story of Ekalavya and Drona to fit Mean Girls, and it was picked up by the audience before even seeing that it was your inspiration! Your writing was very great, and the stories had a very easy flow! Your use of dialogue was super helpful in visualizing the story as well. You have a wonderful portfolio that you should be proud of, and I hope you continue writing past the conclusion of this course!
Hi hi, Emma! I’m really glad that I chose to give feedback on your portfolio this week. I think my favorite story from your portfolio was “The In-Crowd”. I think it was a story that almost everyone can relate to, and it was very entertaining! Before I even scrolled down to see the picture that you added, I was thinking about Mean Girls, so I think that speaks very highly of how you adapted the story of Ekalavya and Drona to fit Mean Girls, and it was picked up by the audience before even seeing that it was your inspiration! Your writing was very great, and the stories had a very easy flow! Your use of dialogue was super helpful in visualizing the story as well. You have a wonderful portfolio that you should be proud of, and I hope you continue writing past the conclusion of this course!
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